Ethan

Subject: Ethan Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:20 pm

Name:Ethan Woods
Age:13
Height 4.9
Hair Blonde
Eyes Blue
Body Type Skinny
Personnailty:good swimmer and can run fast.
God Parent Posidon
Mortal Parent Helena Woods
siblings Evan and Ryan Wood
Powers:water and earthquake and talking to horses
Petd None
Birth Place;New York
Weapon Aris,Celestial Bronze and black handle
RPexapmle
Ethan was on a field trip like usual his evil Reading Teacher was looking at him with a mean look. Why is Mr.Greller looking at me. When Ethan came in the place his teacher said Ethan Woods Ethan looked at his friend who was shocked and he was worried. He tried to look back What do you want from me. I want your sword.

Admin Posts : 164 Join date : 2012-04-09

You have to ask if you can have a Poseidon daughter or son. RP example has to be 4 sentences

Subject: Re: Ethan Thu Apr 26, 2012 10:09 pm

I said he could have son of posiedon

Subject: Re: Ethan Fri Apr 27, 2012 12:12 am

The RP example needs to be at least four sentences long, as said before.

Please spell Poseidon correctly.

You need to change the personality, because 'personality' is different from 'powers'.

The weapon blade must be Celestial Bronze. Not just 'bronze.'

Subject: Re: Ethan Fri Apr 27, 2012 8:41 am

Sorry for double- posting.

Approved.

Newbie Posts : 16 Join date : 2012-09-24 Age : 25

LOL!!!

You have the grammer of a two-year-old!

Admin Posts : 8 Join date : 2012-11-19

Well, that's offensive, Ian K. But I will say that when you write dialogue you use quotation marks like this:

"What do you want from me?" He said.

Your spelling could use a little work and your grammar, but hey, RPGs are supposed to improve our writing skills and make it fun for us so don't be rude, Ian K.